Teenage girls: would you read my story if it was a book?

Im wondering and here the link. right now i know it seems boring and there still are a few typo's so if you would love to help me. heres my email. im on Chapter 4, but i dont want to put them all up. cuz im scared of how many typos i have, i cant spell well, so here's Chapter one: a href="http://www.quizilla.com/stories/8916671/a-teenaged-girls-real-life-chapter-one" rel="nofollow"http://www.quizilla.com/stories/8916671/…/a